Text, sketches and a new page...

So I've placed text on my images now. Some are working better than others, which I kind of expected. For instance, the first encounter with a taker has a huge bulky page of text. I'm thinking of either chopping that text so that there's some at the top of the page and some at the bottom, or I'm thinking I can lose a couple of lines from my taker encounters. As for the latest page, I think I might redo it. I wanted it to be close up to contrast against the previous page but I dunno, it's not visually very interesting, the colours are washed out due to lack of environmental features and it also made placing text pretty difficult. I'll have a rethink. As you can see, I had several thumbnail ideas for that page anyway so I might try one of the others.