NO NO NO silly girl...

Okay I'm pretty happy with this for now. I can at least start the next page in the story now, which will be following on from this example.

I've decided to cut the following lines "But the girl wasn't fooled" etc etc, because they aren't really essential and were screwing with the composition of this page, which now is all spoken text.
Think I'll remove that bird actually. Maybe. Yeah probably.