Ok so, things to note. I changed "he replied" or "she replied" to "silly girl" so that the entire thing is basically speech. That works better right? Good, I thought so. Now I still don't think this works gorgeously as a double spread, but when it's split up by the page border I think it will look like two very nice individual pages. Ummm what else? I mentioned before how these pages will get more interesting as time goes on because there will be more takers on each left hand page. I also want the girl to react to the text in some instances, you know, as if it's literally there, falling down upon her. Maybe. We'll see. I think we're getting close to sorting this page out though. Oh and I like the 2nd image from the top best. I like the font. I think the text works better without it following the sketchy roots of the cartoons. Not sure if I'm allowed to even use that font though.
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