Revisiting pages...

So yesterday felt like a total waste of time. I wasn't happy with anything I made and I still have issues with the Taker who wears clothes. Just before bed I tried to use a different design for her but it that was shit too (see below)

So I wasn't happy with that, and I wasn't happy with the image of all the Takers together either. But first things first, I had to redesign the other Taker. I've ended up with this page now and I'm pretty happy. Next I'll be redoing the above page with my new character design and then I'll probably redo the page with all four Takers.

Changed the mouth shape. I think the above one is a little too cartoony and breaks the style of the book. I've also enhanced the colour of the Taker to make it a little brighter. I've done the following page too.