Edited page and a new one! Hooray!

I'm getting the hang of this shit now. It's all about a nice balanced, spacious composition and little interesting elements and characters. Or something. Also you may notice that I've sorted out the Takers face on my big landscapey page to resemble his earlier incarnations. This stuff always looks kinda sucky on screen, but image it in context, nice white matte paper, crease down the middle. I can't wait to have it in print :)

Oh and I've added this little dotted line now to show the flight path of the insect in pages 3 and 4.