New page/s...

I've shown this image in my crit before but I've applied to the full page spread dimensions now which is cooooool. Originally I experimented with having the words sort of trail off on to different lines for 'take what we can' but it kinda looked sloppy so I've kept it like this for now. Also I know that it's not very normal to have your main image sitting intentionally on the crease of the page but I think because it's a face on, large view of the creature it works. We get all the info we need, nothing is slipping into the crease. Back to storyboarding and stuff now!

I think I may redraw the neck of the bird taker to be a bit more interesting or just to move in a continuous flow rather than the up then down thing I've got going on for this one.